Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have worked hard to get four analysis blogged Cara, you have discussed the conventions and thought about the elements of DISTINCT at times. There is a tendency to describe the action rather than to analyse the elements I have asked you to look at, but on the whole you are showing a good understanding of the conventions of the genres.
At the moment your work is at a level 2/3 border, in order to improve:

• Put the Easy A film opening in the Easy A analysis post
• Give all of your posts a title, otherwise it just picks up the first line of the text as a title and looks messy and disorganised!
• Your blog needs to be tidied up - use the same font throughout and get the film openings and screen shots in to illustrate your points and break up the blocks of text.

Please reply to this blog when you have tackled this work, then I can reassess your grade.